Minor Changes from Revival Beach by The Burning Hell

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11.	Minor Changes	2:36

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Don't have a cow, man
It's alright
Just minor changes
The second chapter
Could use some work
And rearranging

But in general I really like the story arc
I find the landscape descriptions believably stark
And your characters, for the most part, are well-developed but not over-explained
And I love the recurring device of the poisonous rain:

It emphasizes dramatic peaks in the narrative
Like the ultimatum the emperor gives: it sounds extra-imperative
And I was floored by the Doors of Decision, when she finally understands
They all lead back to the start of the labyrinth, and this was all part of his plan

So don't have a cow, man
It's alright
Just minor changes

Credits

from Revival Beach, released September 29, 2017
Written by Mathias Kom.
Darren Browne: bouzouki
Ariel Sharratt: bass clarinet, accordion
Mathias Kom: guitar, sleigh bells, vocals

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